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The End of My World (TEoMW) on MN Fanfiction

Post by PJO-geek on Thu Nov 26, 2009 4:54 pm

Hey peoples!! If you've seen my signiture, you'll see that I'm writing a story called The End of My World. No one is giving me any reviews, and I really want to know if it's good so I can continue writing. But if it's not doing good, I probably won't continue. And I know it's not the best start to a story, but not everyone's perfect, right? Sad So please, review!!!!

Oh, and you can post comments about the story and suggestions for the next chapter!!! Very Happy

(It's not in my siggy anymore, so if you want to see it and can't find it, PM me and I'll give you the web address. Thanx!!)


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Re: The End of My World (TEoMW) on MN Fanfiction

Post by PJO-geek on Mon Jan 11, 2010 1:35 am

is anyone going to help me? please?
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Post by athenachick on Mon Jan 11, 2010 4:44 pm

ok... i like it, but the title seems kind of gloomy...... and a bit over used..... just a thought... i like it tho (:
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Post by PJO-geek on Mon Jan 11, 2010 10:52 pm

thanks! but, why do you think the title is gloomy? and, what do you mean by over used? I'm not quite done with it yet.
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Post by athenachick on Wed Jan 13, 2010 9:11 pm

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooh...... u know what, i thought it was the end of the world, i kinda missed the MY thing..... sorry........ (:
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Post by PJO-geek on Thu Jan 14, 2010 11:25 pm

that's ok. we're only human. we're supposed to make mistakes. I added some new chapters if you want to check them out. there's The Beach Promise and Haunting Words.
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Post by athenachick on Sat Jan 16, 2010 9:15 pm

nice!!
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Post by percyjackson101 on Sun Jan 17, 2010 8:33 pm

DUDE!!!!! THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!!!! IT IS AWESOME!!! U BETTER CONTINUE WRITING..... LIKE I JUST GOT HOOKED.
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Post by PJO-geek on Tue Jan 19, 2010 10:46 pm

don't worry, I will. I just haven't had a lot of time lately. as soon as I have more time I'll start writing another chapter. and I WILL finish the story!!! (just don't know when yet. It will take a while.)
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Post by Artemisrocks on Wed Jan 20, 2010 9:37 pm

This story is really good!
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Post by PJO-geek on Wed Jan 20, 2010 11:50 pm

Thanks!!! Do you think you will write one? I know you're really creative. You could create an awesome story!! I know you all could!!
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Post by percyjackson101 on Thu Jan 21, 2010 1:26 am

wow... nice person alert. jkjk
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Post by PJO-geek on Thu Jan 21, 2010 2:52 am

*crossed arms, tapping foot, looking sternly at you* ah-hem.

JK,JK
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Post by athenachick on Thu Jan 21, 2010 9:50 pm

lol!
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Post by PJO-geek on Thu Jan 21, 2010 11:33 pm

Thanks! anyway, any ideas for what I could add to the story?
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Post by PJO-geek on Sun Jan 31, 2010 12:00 am

I added a new chapter called War Council. It's kinda long, and the character POV's were either too short or too long, but I thought it sounded better that way. Please review!!!
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Post by tinkerirock on Sun Jan 31, 2010 3:21 pm

omg i love it!! maybe u should have like grover come along too in the quest since he is the God of the Wild now, he would like have powers over naature or something. LOVE THE ROMANTIC PARTS BETWEEN PERCY AND ANNABETH!! o and maybe the prochecy should come truee and like they find halfbloods on the way to find Zues's bolt.... o and use the other entrance to the underworld that they mentioned in the Last Olympian, one that could be opened by a satyr's tunes or soemthing. keep on writing!!
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Post by PJO-geek on Mon Feb 01, 2010 12:16 am

thanks!! i guess it could be possible to have them find 2 other half-bloods, but I'm not sure how I would do the whole: "To storm or fire the world must fall" or "And foes bear arms to the doors of death"... OMG's!!! I just thought of something awesome to put in my story!!!! *writing it down* thanks so much!!! I'm going to write as soon as I get done with dinner! (time for dinner now) no, I don't get on the computer during dinner.
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Post by tinkerirock on Mon Feb 01, 2010 3:15 am

ur welcome... o and the part about "with storm or fire, the world must fall", maybe u could do is like the prophecy realy meant was the world must fall as in an EXAGERATION, like the world really didn't fall
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Post by Posidonsdaughter on Mon Feb 01, 2010 4:20 am

I want to read what you wrote, but all I keep getting is the review page. can you help me get to your book. Thanks.
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Post by PJO-geek on Tue Feb 02, 2010 12:12 am

Sure!! Here's the table of contents. Oh, and please start at the beginning.

http://mnfanfiction.uuuq.com/viewstory.php?sid=19&warning=9

hope this helps!!!
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Post by Posidonsdaughter on Tue Feb 02, 2010 1:09 am

I haven't tried it yet but will. Thanks.
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Post by tinkerirock on Tue Feb 02, 2010 1:52 am

so r u ganna add new chapters **very wanting to read further** omigod, less than 2 weeks til LIGHTNING THEIF comes out!!!!!! eek, i know..off topic sry
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Post by PJO-geek on Wed Feb 03, 2010 12:56 am

I'm writing the next one now, but I don't know when I'm going to post. really busy.
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Post by Pendragon on Fri Feb 26, 2010 8:10 pm

Well, tell us when you write more material, PJO-geek. By far, you're one of the best writers on this site.
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