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The End of My World (TEoMW) on MN Fanfiction

Post by PJO-geek on Thu Nov 26, 2009 4:54 pm

First topic message reminder :

Hey peoples!! If you've seen my signiture, you'll see that I'm writing a story called The End of My World. No one is giving me any reviews, and I really want to know if it's good so I can continue writing. But if it's not doing good, I probably won't continue. And I know it's not the best start to a story, but not everyone's perfect, right? Sad So please, review!!!!

Oh, and you can post comments about the story and suggestions for the next chapter!!! Very Happy

(It's not in my siggy anymore, so if you want to see it and can't find it, PM me and I'll give you the web address. Thanx!!)


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Re: The End of My World (TEoMW) on MN Fanfiction

Post by PJO-geek on Fri Feb 26, 2010 10:49 pm

Totally! There's six chapters right now, and I'm writing the seventh one this weekend, hopefully posting it sometime next week! I'm writing it down in a notebook so I can take it in the car ride to go volunteer at the Animal Rescue League of Iowa, which is just outside of the town (well, I guess it's almost more like a city, but not yet), or at my 7 year old sister's basketball game! I really want to get it up and start writing the next chapter as well, but yes, I'll totally tell you guys when the new material is up. Oh, and I story I would recommend checking out is Dues et Veritas' called The Burning Thread. There's some big words for some of the younger ones, even me for some, and I'm 13!!


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Post by tinkerirock on Sat Feb 27, 2010 2:22 am

wow, im ganna check it out in a minute!

p.s. are we allowed to post anyything on FanFiction thats not related to Percy Jackson??
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Post by PJO-geek on Sat Feb 27, 2010 2:40 am

Uhhhh... you'll have to check the the terms of use. I don't think so. But, if you want to write a fanfic, you could post it on www.fanfiction.net, but you'd have to become a member. I think. I've only read stories on there.
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Post by Pendragon on Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:29 am

Hey PJO-geek, can you bring up the link to your FanFiction again?
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Post by Posidonsdaughter on Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:38 am

Hey I PM'd you a review, didn't I?

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Re: The End of My World (TEoMW) on MN Fanfiction

Post by PJO-geek on Sat Feb 27, 2010 9:05 pm

Poseidonsdaughter, I'm not sure if you did or not. Pendragon, here's the link to the table of contents:

http://mnfanfiction.uuuq.com/viewstory.php?sid=19&warning=9

I'm almost done with the 7th chapter, and should have it up soon!!!
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Post by Pendragon on Sat Feb 27, 2010 9:09 pm

Great to know! Emrys roars with excitement.
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Post by Posidonsdaughter on Sat Feb 27, 2010 9:25 pm

I did respond to your story here is the pm I sent you. I read the last chapter again last night. What ideas do you need. Have thought ahead as to who is the thief, the reason for the theft, perils the heroes will face?
Or are these the things you need help with?

Dear PJO-geek,
I haven't seen you for awhile. I hope everything is okay with you. I finally got to re-read your story. It was just as good the second time. The only thing I can suggest is describing the surroundings a little more fully. What the cam Wwhat everything looked or felt like. ie: the grit of the sand, the heat of the sun, the smell of all those kids in one small room. Otherwise, you are doing an excellent job of getting into each characters head.
Stop apologizing at the start of each chapter get rid of them. This is your work and you have no need to talk it down, and don't be concerned about the length. With all of your chapters let them take their own length. You are telling a story and just let the story flow.
I look forward to see what is to come. Just make sure you don't just concentrate on Percy and Annabeth's relationship, physical one I mean.
The quest should be interesting with Nico and Clarisse along, both hot tempered.
Well take care. Write more soon.
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Re: The End of My World (TEoMW) on MN Fanfiction

Post by PJO-geek on Tue Mar 02, 2010 1:35 am

I remember now. Thanks.

Hey peoples!! Seventh chapter's up! Enjoy!
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Post by Posidonsdaughter on Tue Mar 02, 2010 1:55 am

Holy Hephaestus, PJO-geek! Great job as usual!

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Post by Pendragon on Tue Mar 02, 2010 1:57 am

Same here! You're an amazing writer.
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Post by tinkerirock on Tue Mar 02, 2010 2:00 am

**has anyone read my poem from fanfiction yet?
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Post by PJO-geek on Tue Mar 02, 2010 2:02 am

Yeah, it's really good!! I dropped you a review in the fanfiction section.
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Post by tinkerirock on Tue Mar 02, 2010 2:07 am

thankz for the review! any more ideas?
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Post by Pendragon on Tue Mar 02, 2010 2:14 am

Hey Tink, nice job! Really got me in the mood to hack something up with my sword(and yes, I actually have a sharp steel sword in my room.)
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Post by PJO-geek on Tue Mar 02, 2010 2:32 am

Sweet!! Anyway, back on topic, any ideas to add to my story for the next chapter?
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Post by Pendragon on Sat Mar 06, 2010 4:15 am

Other than what I sent you, not really. Maybe a look inside Nico's cabin would be good.

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Post by PJO-geek on Mon Mar 08, 2010 12:10 am

I will, promise, just not sure what chapter it's going to be in yet. Anything else?
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Post by monsterslayer on Mon Mar 08, 2010 1:22 am

its going good so far, but i think you should mix it up more
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Post by PJO-geek on Mon Mar 08, 2010 3:13 am

Don't worry. The next chapter is gonig to confuse everyone plenty.

Just wait. The story will me much more jumbled up then.
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Post by Pendragon on Tue Mar 09, 2010 3:07 am

Good to hear. Can't wait!!

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Post by PJO-geek on Thu Mar 11, 2010 10:35 pm

Almost done with 8th chapter!!! Yay!! I'll be going to Oakville, a couple miles away from St. Louis to my grandma's house. Luckily, she has a computer, so if I don't get this chapter posted before I leave I'll get it up down there. I'll also work on the 9th chapter!! And hopefully get that suggestion in from you Pendragon!!!
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Post by tinkerirock on Thu Mar 11, 2010 11:13 pm

WOW it sounds amazing!! continue!!!!!
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Post by Pendragon on Fri Mar 12, 2010 1:29 am

Thanks! Looking forward to it.

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Re: The End of My World (TEoMW) on MN Fanfiction

Post by tinkerirock on Fri Mar 12, 2010 1:53 am

im working on this series called "Heroes-in-Training", im on the second story, though i dont know where to post it. can we post it on fan-fiction??
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