Elotex Riada chapter 6

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Elotex Riada chapter 6




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"Cybermen," Klea said "thats so geeky, thank you for your help now then lets-" "no really they are" Elotex said "yeah and i am an atomic android." Klea went on "SHUT UP!" Elotex screamed "i have no time to explain what they are but i know what disrupted our time/space warp." "what?" percy asked "two things. A) a vortex manipulator don't ask B) me." "how was it you?" Klea asked "i accidentally put some auric magic into a non-auric spell." "good job Mr. Genius." "hey!" "SHH" annabeth said "hear that?" "EXTERMINATE! EXTERMINATE!" ZING ZING ZING. "oh crud" Elotex muttered "this is very bad. everyone grab my hands now!"


"where are we?" Klea said, a bit dazed. BOOM BOOM. They all ran outside to see a building blowing up. Klea and Elotex immediatly put up shields around everyone as they watched a blimp rise from the roof with a rope swinging from it. "Oh my god. its him." Elotex sated "its who?" Klea asked "see the one on the top?" "yeah" "that's the doctor." "take it!" the man said as he tossed it down to a man below him who was above a cybermen. suddenly a peircing noise filled the air "they'll only get one rope off. ecturis vereastium paulasu." then the cybermen fell off and into the flames. "so lets get the heck out of here."

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"Chiron, they've been sighted!" Chiron galloped up the hill. "wait! Where is percy?!"
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Elotex Riada chapter 6 :: Comments

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Post on Fri Jul 09, 2010 11:34 pm by Azteza

very short this one is

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Post on Fri Jul 09, 2010 11:48 pm by riczhang

This chapter is well written but a suggestion to get the optimal chapters they should be at least 1000 words in length.

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Post on Sat Jul 10, 2010 8:31 pm by Azteza

u think i am gunna count every stinking word?

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Post on Sat Jul 10, 2010 10:54 pm by riczhang

Azteza wrote:u think i am gunna count every stinking word?

Not counts there's Word to do that for you and just an estimate.

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Post on Sun Jul 11, 2010 11:39 pm by Azteza

oh well i would say like 500 words but that chapter had only one point wich you will find out in the next chapter or latr than that (AND it isn't that percy was the one that was lost Razz)

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