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Elotex Riada chapter 5 (this will be a long one)

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Elo's POV
I read all night. Klea had me skip the coven for reading this book!! but then Klea and I trained on what the book taught me a week later i knew it all. well most of it. one page was in a strange language. wierd. so this is day one of auric training. "come on reach inside you!!" Klea screamed at me "ok" i mumbled and fought down the urge to throw up. i looked around and found it. "Viporea lmlasio tredsa nuyemphi!!" a gold light shot out of my hands and my eyes turned gold. just the coloured part though. wierd. Suddenly i was famished. Klea gave me something to eat and for the next week this is how it went. so then we were off going on the quest. We went east as east as we will go. now i am starting to think this quest is shorter than it seems.

Klea's POV
EEAARRGGGHHHH!!! i hate Elotex!!! he is such a sissy! so we went so far east that we hit a train station. no biggie. then we realized what was on the train. the nemeon lion. great, just great, Elotex said we should make a run for it. like i said sissy, but then annabeth said "wait a second! don't lions live in dens?" "yes they do." i replied then realised what she was saying. "so how do we kill it?" Annabeth said. i looked at Elotex expectantly "do i have to?" he said. "yes" "okedoky. Vleanisiam fleisaerias tytusidamsi!" suddenly the lion started withering and shaking, just as Elotex's eyes went gold. then it shrank into a jacket my size exactly. "here Annabeth." Elotex said as he threw it to her "what was that for?" Percy asked "you want her to die then?" Elotex replied "no you don't but it said one would be lost in the pillows of sand!" "oh yeah" Percy said "well every one on the train." Elotex said "why" i asked "and what did you do to the lion?" "A) the train is abandoned and i can get us to were we have to go with it. B) i made steel worms erupt in it's stomach and then they worked extra fast, would you like an other demonstration?" Elotex said. I paled "no thanks" "good now then all aboard!!"

Elotex's POV
We got on the train and i went into the controll room. "xionrepulsa regrresta luminia." i muttered(eyes went Gold)and suddenly the everything went all fuzzy. then we were in the sahara desert.

Camp
"They have been gone for a month" Chiron said "i'm sending someone out for them."
"they will cope." Mr.D said "don't worry"

Elotex's POV
"A MONTH!" Klea roared at me "we have been gone for a whole MONTH!!!" "yes! yes! sheesh the space/Time continuem took a bit longer than i anticipated..." "umm guys?" Annabeth said "where's Percy?" "BOO!!" said percy jumping onto annabeth "you scared me to death!" Annabeth said "hey don't say that, our little friends down there might get the wrong idea." Percy said. Thud, Thud, Thud, Thud, Thud. "what's that?" Klea said i looked into the distance "oh no" i said "not here not now-" there was a blimp above us. what was a blimp doing in the desert. then i saw the sign on the bottom. "your kidding" i said "what is it?" Klea said. "well unless you want to die, RUN!!" i stated. we ran and ran untill we found a little cave in a little mountain, covered in sand. "what are those things?!" Klea said as we heard the Thud Thud Thud pass. "ok first things first we are on the wrong planet." "what?" Klea said "yeah we are on a planet two times parallel to our earth." "how do you know?" Annabeth said "because" i said "up there we have a army of cybermen."
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riczhang

Post Thu Jul 08, 2010 4:15 pm by riczhang

I don't recall reading chapters 1-4 so if you could could you upload those too?

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tinkerirock

Post Fri Jul 09, 2010 12:41 am by tinkerirock

yea ill have to reread the whole story cuz i read it a long time ago

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riczhang

Post Fri Jul 09, 2010 1:38 am by riczhang

Another point change your character name soudns too much like alex rider.

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Azteza

Post Fri Jul 09, 2010 10:06 pm by Azteza

ok first no changing names cuz i dgas and the whole story is on mortalnet fanfiction type that in search bar and then go to authors then click azteza lol

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riczhang

Post Fri Jul 09, 2010 10:16 pm by riczhang

Azteza wrote:ok first no changing names cuz i dgas and the whole story is on mortalnet fanfiction type that in search bar and then go to authors then click azteza lol

Not everyone at the moment may be able to access the fanfiction section right now, due to unforseen problems so if you could, then that would be a really great, if you can't then don't bother. It's just if you want to.

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Azteza

Post Sat Jul 10, 2010 8:37 pm by Azteza

riczhang wrote:
Azteza wrote:ok first no changing names cuz i dgas and the whole story is on mortalnet fanfiction type that in search bar and then go to authors then click azteza lol

Not everyone at the moment may be able to access the fanfiction section right now, due to unforseen problems so if you could, then that would be a really great, if you can't then don't bother. It's just if you want to.



yea i know i cant get into my account to copy it and i cant go on the sight cuz it wont let me sorry bout that

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Azteza

Post Sat Jul 10, 2010 8:42 pm by Azteza

oh yea one more thing if you can copy it please copy it into this section than i would be thankful but as you do this please wright above it (all parts of this storyline are rightful property of Azteza FORUM/FAnfiction) TY ALLOT DUDE (EETTEE) CYa azzy

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riczhang

Post Sat Jul 10, 2010 10:50 pm by riczhang

Azteza wrote:oh yea one more thing if you can copy it please copy it into this section than i would be thankful but as you do this please wright above it (all parts of this storyline are rightful property of Azteza FORUM/FAnfiction) TY ALLOT DUDE (EETTEE) CYa azzy


I can't either I can go as far as your description page but no furthur./

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Azteza

Post Sun Jul 11, 2010 11:38 pm by Azteza

CCCC?! its dead

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smoothmoves97

Post Mon Jul 12, 2010 12:05 am by smoothmoves97

What does CCCC mean...?

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Azteza

Post Fri Jul 30, 2010 11:04 pm by Azteza

sory my computer went on PTTHHHHT (dead ish) then so it added three more c's it was spust tbe C (see)

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