Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?

I have a story on fanfiction, it's called Dia's Curse, does anyone have any comments or ideas for it?

http://mnfanfiction.uuuq.com/viewstory.php?sid=41

I added another chapter, comments please??

I read it, it's a great story!!! I Love it. Keep at it. You're writing skills are awsome, and you build suspense really well.

i have a story too, its called the Hidden Truth, Please check it out! the link is in my signiture!

thanks for the reviews! I'm going to add another chapter within the next few days...a few more reviews would help...more comments please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks!

wohoo!! anyone read mine yet?

i just read urs, its really good u should add more chapters!

I promise I'll get to both of yours this Weekend and give both of them a review.

Thanks

Dia,


It was an interesting story the rules of life. I think that you should write more and I can't really pass judgement on it as there is only 2 chapters I think to effectively rate it I would need more writing.


Tink,


Will edit post and post review when I finish reading.

riczhang wrote:Dia,


It was an interesting story the rules of life. I think that you should write more and I can't really pass judgement on it as there is only 2 chapters I think to effectively rate it I would need more writing.


Tink,


Will edit post and post review when I finish reading.

Wait just one darn second!!! You pased judgement on mine, when i only had two chapters, and then when i had five, i think that you should treat evryone the same. Because, you are one of the styaff, you can't treat people diffrently.

P.S.

I'm guesing you didn't like my story. just because it's diffrent!!! (Based on Percy jackson AND the kane chronicles. )

Sincerely,

Marcos522.

So I have a few points to make.

1st of all I would like to state that I passed judgement when you had 4 chapters.

2nd of all I believe that your chapters are larger

3rd of all it is a story, and I'm entitled to my own opinion

4th of all I'm treating everyone fairly, by giving everyone my real opinion, not some made up one to make people feel good.

5th of all it is true that I don't like crossovers, the same way I don't like twilight, and my opinion for twilight is some unoriginal Dracula and Romeo and Juliet mix.(No offence to ANYONE who likes Twilight)


If you have any other points to make, please PM me.

well i like twilight so....

Told you I didn't mean to offend anyone who likes it, just my opinion.

I like twilight too, but I don't find it offensive

I kind of like it

I read the Twilight saga last year. Not my favorite book series. I liked it for a little while but it was very forgettable.

It didnt look interesting and i wont read it.

wait, are you talking about Twilight?

ya i dont like twilight i didnt mean marco's story because i like that more the i bet i would twilight. Sorry to all twilight fans.

tinkerirock wrote:wait, are you talking about Twilight?

No, I just brought up the point of how his story was a mix between 2 pre-existing stories just like twilight is.

ya they both are but a lot of stories are like that.

posiden#1god wrote:ya they both are but a lot of stories are like that.

None so obvious, I can stand subtly but not up-frontness.

What?

I would read both stories but Christof had to close the FanFiction site down