Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
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marcos522
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Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
I have a story on fanfiction, it's called Dia's Curse, does anyone have any comments or ideas for it?
http://mnfanfiction.uuuq.com/viewstory.php?sid=41
http://mnfanfiction.uuuq.com/viewstory.php?sid=41
DiaClaireNoel- Olympian Demigod
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Humor : "Finnick?" I say, "Maybe some pants?" He looks down at his legs as if noticing his outfit for the first time. Then he whips off his hospital gown leaving him in just his underwear. "Why? Do you find this"- he strikes a ridiculously provocative pose -"distracting?"
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
I added another chapter, comments please??
DiaClaireNoel- Olympian Demigod
- Imortal Parent : Athena
Number of posts : 642
Location : locked in a basement
Humor : "Finnick?" I say, "Maybe some pants?" He looks down at his legs as if noticing his outfit for the first time. Then he whips off his hospital gown leaving him in just his underwear. "Why? Do you find this"- he strikes a ridiculously provocative pose -"distracting?"
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
I read it, it's a great story!!! I Love it. Keep at it. You're writing skills are awsome, and you build suspense really well.
Last edited by marcos522 on Fri May 28, 2010 5:24 pm; edited 2 times in total
marcos522- Mortal
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
i have a story too, its called the Hidden Truth, Please check it out! the link is in my signiture!
tinkerirock- Big Three Demigod
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
thanks for the reviews! I'm going to add another chapter within the next few days...a few more reviews would help...more comments please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks!
DiaClaireNoel- Olympian Demigod
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Humor : "Finnick?" I say, "Maybe some pants?" He looks down at his legs as if noticing his outfit for the first time. Then he whips off his hospital gown leaving him in just his underwear. "Why? Do you find this"- he strikes a ridiculously provocative pose -"distracting?"
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
wohoo!! anyone read mine yet?
tinkerirock- Big Three Demigod
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
i just read urs, its really good u should add more chapters!
DiaClaireNoel- Olympian Demigod
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Humor : "Finnick?" I say, "Maybe some pants?" He looks down at his legs as if noticing his outfit for the first time. Then he whips off his hospital gown leaving him in just his underwear. "Why? Do you find this"- he strikes a ridiculously provocative pose -"distracting?"
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
I promise I'll get to both of yours this Weekend and give both of them a review.
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DiaClaireNoel- Olympian Demigod
- Imortal Parent : Athena
Number of posts : 642
Location : locked in a basement
Humor : "Finnick?" I say, "Maybe some pants?" He looks down at his legs as if noticing his outfit for the first time. Then he whips off his hospital gown leaving him in just his underwear. "Why? Do you find this"- he strikes a ridiculously provocative pose -"distracting?"
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
Dia,
It was an interesting story the rules of life. I think that you should write more and I can't really pass judgement on it as there is only 2 chapters I think to effectively rate it I would need more writing.
Tink,
Will edit post and post review when I finish reading.
It was an interesting story the rules of life. I think that you should write more and I can't really pass judgement on it as there is only 2 chapters I think to effectively rate it I would need more writing.
Tink,
Will edit post and post review when I finish reading.
riczhang- Staff
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
riczhang wrote:Dia,
It was an interesting story the rules of life. I think that you should write more and I can't really pass judgement on it as there is only 2 chapters I think to effectively rate it I would need more writing.
Tink,
Will edit post and post review when I finish reading.
Wait just one darn second!!! You pased judgement on mine, when i only had two chapters, and then when i had five, i think that you should treat evryone the same. Because, you are one of the styaff, you can't treat people diffrently.
P.S.
I'm guesing you didn't like my story. just because it's diffrent!!! (Based on Percy jackson AND the kane chronicles. )
Sincerely,
Marcos522.
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
So I have a few points to make.
1st of all I would like to state that I passed judgement when you had 4 chapters.
2nd of all I believe that your chapters are larger
3rd of all it is a story, and I'm entitled to my own opinion
4th of all I'm treating everyone fairly, by giving everyone my real opinion, not some made up one to make people feel good.
5th of all it is true that I don't like crossovers, the same way I don't like twilight, and my opinion for twilight is some unoriginal Dracula and Romeo and Juliet mix.(No offence to ANYONE who likes Twilight)
If you have any other points to make, please PM me.
1st of all I would like to state that I passed judgement when you had 4 chapters.
2nd of all I believe that your chapters are larger
3rd of all it is a story, and I'm entitled to my own opinion
4th of all I'm treating everyone fairly, by giving everyone my real opinion, not some made up one to make people feel good.
5th of all it is true that I don't like crossovers, the same way I don't like twilight, and my opinion for twilight is some unoriginal Dracula and Romeo and Juliet mix.(No offence to ANYONE who likes Twilight)
If you have any other points to make, please PM me.
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
well i like twilight so....
tinkerirock- Big Three Demigod
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
Told you I didn't mean to offend anyone who likes it, just my opinion.
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
I like twilight too, but I don't find it offensive
DiaClaireNoel- Olympian Demigod
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Humor : "Finnick?" I say, "Maybe some pants?" He looks down at his legs as if noticing his outfit for the first time. Then he whips off his hospital gown leaving him in just his underwear. "Why? Do you find this"- he strikes a ridiculously provocative pose -"distracting?"
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
I kind of like it
posiden#1god- Big Three Demigod
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
I read the Twilight saga last year. Not my favorite book series. I liked it for a little while but it was very forgettable.
smoothmoves97- Big Three Demigod
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
It didnt look interesting and i wont read it.
posiden#1god- Big Three Demigod
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
wait, are you talking about Twilight?
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
ya i dont like twilight i didnt mean marco's story because i like that more the i bet i would twilight. Sorry to all twilight fans.
posiden#1god- Big Three Demigod
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
tinkerirock wrote:wait, are you talking about Twilight?
No, I just brought up the point of how his story was a mix between 2 pre-existing stories just like twilight is.
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ya they both are but a lot of stories are like that.
posiden#1god- Big Three Demigod
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posiden#1god wrote:ya they both are but a lot of stories are like that.
None so obvious, I can stand subtly but not up-frontness.
riczhang- Staff
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posiden#1god- Big Three Demigod
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Humor : When i went on a road trip with my brothers and my brother waking up in the car wondering why he was in Rhode Island
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Re: Ideas/comments on my fanfiction story?!?
I would read both stories but Christof had to close the FanFiction site down
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