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Post by tinkerirock Tue Feb 23, 2010 11:42 pm

First topic message reminder :

okay heres ANOTHER game i just invented

i will start off with a plot and you have to continue it with 3-4 sentences. try to limit the # of sentences, it wouldn't be fair if one person did 3-4 and another did like 20! its has to stay on topic. lets see where it goes! remember to relate and continue the story. you could add in silly/randome things as long as they sorta make sense.

okay here's the start up

There once was a kid named Kalrius. He was the Son of Apollo. He figured out he was a half-blood when he met Percy at school one day.


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Post by penguinsoldier Fri Apr 09, 2010 10:35 pm

Apollo was in typically casual clothing. A loose blue shirt and light brown khaki shorts, complete with gold ray-bans, he looked like he was a high school kid going off to the beach in his dad's car. Usually I would bow before gods and goddesses when they showed up. Apollo however was different. The first time we met he was also giving us a ride, except that at the time he was letting Thalia drive. The whole ordeal was so scary she could have joined the Gray Sisters. I was glad this time it was a merc and not a flying chariot that we were in.

"Apollo, nice ride." I said, admiring the gleaming body of the car. The gold alloy wheels were especially shiny, but the tyres didn't seem to be touching the ground; they were separated by a thin layer of golden glittering light. Where the mercedes badge should have been on the car, there was instead a golden bow and arrow.

"Thanks Perc. I try to keep with the modern designs. You should have seen what I was driving during the 50's. Absolutely terrible cars back then..." Apollo then turned to Thalia. "Ah, my one time chauffeur. How have you been Thalia? I hear you've joined my sister on her hunt. Its a shame, we could have had fun..." He trailed off when he saw Kalrius, who was fixing him with an angry look.

Thalia herself didn't look impressed. As a hunter of Artemis, she knew well the habits of Apollo. He did it with all the maidens. But this was Kalrius' first time seeing his dad 'in action'. He did not seem pleased.

"Er-hem! I am Kalrius Wright, son of Sonya Wright, a mortal woman whom you claimed to have loved and who loved you back. I don't mind if you don't consider me your son, but don't insult my mother by flirting with other women in front of me." Kalrius challenged Apollo to reply, but he was silent. I winced. I had never seen someone shout at a god before. History told me it wasn't a very good idea. Apollo however looked sheepish and embarrassed.

"I'm sorry Kalrius. Your right. I won't forsake Sonya's love for me and for you. I'll do my best to keep you safe. I tell you now that I still love your mom. A god falls in love easily, but he can never forget. I have loved many women in my life, all of them special to me. My children are all dear to me too. You are my son, and though you may think otherwise, I do love you. Perhaps we can spend some time together once this whole business is over, huh?"

Kalrius' expression softened at these words, but he still looked doubtful. "We'll see about that. I don't even know whether we will get back safely from this trip."

"Don't worry, we'll be fine." I said. I didn't believe it though. The propecy wasn't exactly friendly, and it seemed either me or Kalrius would have to face some sort of challege or test.

"Anyway, enough with the introductions." Thalia assumed a Lieutenant role as she so often did. "My lord Apollo, we need to get to the goddess Hecate's Lair. She is the main suspect in a plot to murder varius members of camp as well as kidnapping several of them. Do you know where she is?"

Apollo considered for a while and finally spoke.

"This will not be an easy journey for you. She lives among steep mountains and deep woods, all enchanted by her magic. My chariot will get you to the boundry of her powers, but no further. The rest is up to you."

At this news I deflated. A small part of me thought we could just turn up at her place, defeat her and take the girls back. Now it seemed I'd have to hack through forest and mountains before I got to Annabeth. Kalrius also looked worried. I guess for a first mission, he already had alot at stake.

Thalis glanced at us and frowned. "Don't be such little boys. Do you want to save our friends or not?" Then she turned back to the car. "That'll be fine Lord Apollo, but where does she live?"
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Post by Posidonsdaughter Sun Apr 11, 2010 6:55 am

WE ARE MOVING THIS BACK TO BOOKS - OTHERS tHE NEW WORKING TITLE IS KALRIUS SON OF APOLLO - A WORKING TITLE
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Post by tinkerirock Sun Apr 11, 2010 3:26 pm

yea i think thats a good title .
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Post by penguinsoldier Sun Apr 11, 2010 3:46 pm

What about Kalrius and the enchanted mountain? (cos Hecate is living on a mountain)
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Post by riczhang Sun Apr 11, 2010 4:00 pm

Sounds too bland
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Post by tinkerirock Sun Apr 11, 2010 4:12 pm

idk. .. . how bout 'kalrius: hero and son of apollo' something of that sort...
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Post by riczhang Sun Apr 11, 2010 4:18 pm

tinkerirock wrote:idk. .. . how bout 'kalrius: hero and son of apollo' something of that sort...


It looks good by when you read it, it just sounds weird.
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Post by PJO-geek Tue Jun 08, 2010 3:48 pm

Anybody have any ideas what to write next? If so, please do! Wink
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Post by smoothmoves97 Fri Jun 18, 2010 6:38 pm

Write a story about a son or daughter of Dionysus. That will be funny.
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Post by PJO-geek Fri Jun 18, 2010 7:23 pm

Well, we kinda have to finish this story first...

Who's going next?
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